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-BlogApp is a [BSP application](BSP) that synchronises blog posts among groups of devices. The creator of a blog or any subscriber may invite their contacts to subscribe. Only the creator can write posts.
+BlogApp is a [BSP application](BSP) that synchronises blog posts among groups of devices. Any subscriber to a blog can invite their contacts to subscribe, but only the creator can write posts.
 
 ### Channel identifiers